From: Tim Bishop <tim@bishnet.net>
Date: Fri, 11 Feb 2005 23:37:08 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Change wording and drop outdated URLs.
X-Git-Url: http://git.i-scream.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=ecb45042eb58f03b34ad500e05b4407f3663d9aa;p=www.i-scream.org.git

Change wording and drop outdated URLs.
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diff --git a/www/who.xhtml b/www/who.xhtml
index eba7d48..da8cdf0 100644
--- a/www/who.xhtml
+++ b/www/who.xhtml
@@ -14,10 +14,10 @@
             Who We Are
           </h1>
           <p>
-            We started out as a group of four final year
+            i-scream started out as a group of four final year
             <a href="http://www.cs.kent.ac.uk">Computer Science</a>
-            students at the University of Kent doing our final year
-            project. During that year we developed the
+            students at the University of Kent doing a final year
+            project. During that year they developed the
             <a href="/cms/">CMS</a> package more or less as it stands
             today.
           </p>
@@ -42,10 +42,6 @@
             <li>
               <a href="http://www.cs.kent.ac.uk/people/staff/tdb/">Work</a>
             </li>
-            <li>
-              <a href="http://www.bishnet.net/tim/cv.shtml">View my
-              C.V.</a>
-            </li>
           </ul>
           <p>
             <b>Alex Moore</b> - ajm@i-scream.org
@@ -61,11 +57,6 @@
           <p>
             <b>Peter Saunders</b> - pajs@i-scream.org
           </p>
-          <ul>
-            <li>
-              <a href="http://www.cs.kent.ac.uk/people/staff/pajs/">Work</a>
-            </li>
-          </ul>
           <p>
             Group Mailing List -
             <a href="mailto:dev@i-scream.org">dev@i-scream.org</a>