From: Tim Bishop <tim@bishnet.net>
Date: Mon, 20 Nov 2000 03:08:21 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Yeah... my grammer sucks :-)
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Yeah... my grammer sucks :-)
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diff --git a/www/who.shtml b/www/who.shtml
index cd272be..175f605 100644
--- a/www/who.shtml
+++ b/www/who.shtml
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
        <p align="left">
         AJ is the ideas man... he is always coming up with "yet another" funky
         little idea we could use. Using CORBA was probably his idea, and as such
-        him and Tim spend there time sending messages over CORBA.
+        him and Tim spend their time sending messages over CORBA.
        </p>
        
        <p align="left">
@@ -75,17 +75,13 @@
        
        <p aligh="left">
         Paul is our resident web guru, and therefore gets lumbered with anything
-        vaguely related to the web... thus he gets to implement the XML :)
+        vaguely related to the web... that's why he gets to implement the XML stuff :)
        </p>
        
        <p align="left">
         Group Mailing List - <a href="mailto:dev@i-scream.org.uk">dev@i-scream.org.uk</a>
        </p>
        
-       <p align="left">
-        In time we may decide to write a bit about ourselves.
-       </p>
-       
        </font>
       </td>
      </tr>   
diff --git a/www/who.xhtml b/www/who.xhtml
index cd272be..175f605 100644
--- a/www/who.xhtml
+++ b/www/who.xhtml
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
        <p align="left">
         AJ is the ideas man... he is always coming up with "yet another" funky
         little idea we could use. Using CORBA was probably his idea, and as such
-        him and Tim spend there time sending messages over CORBA.
+        him and Tim spend their time sending messages over CORBA.
        </p>
        
        <p align="left">
@@ -75,17 +75,13 @@
        
        <p aligh="left">
         Paul is our resident web guru, and therefore gets lumbered with anything
-        vaguely related to the web... thus he gets to implement the XML :)
+        vaguely related to the web... that's why he gets to implement the XML stuff :)
        </p>
        
        <p align="left">
         Group Mailing List - <a href="mailto:dev@i-scream.org.uk">dev@i-scream.org.uk</a>
        </p>
        
-       <p align="left">
-        In time we may decide to write a bit about ourselves.
-       </p>
-       
        </font>
       </td>
      </tr>