From: Tim Bishop <tim@bishnet.net>
Date: Fri, 25 May 2001 18:11:55 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Updated slightly.
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Updated slightly.
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diff --git a/www/cms/probdomain.shtml b/www/cms/probdomain.shtml
index 49667ad..cd274c1 100644
--- a/www/cms/probdomain.shtml
+++ b/www/cms/probdomain.shtml
@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@
        <center><h3>Original Problem</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
-        This is the original specification we were given when we took
-        on the project, and it seems an ideal basis for the problem
-        domain.
+        This is the original specification given to us when we
+        started the project. The i-scream central monitoring
+        system meets this specification, and aims to extend it
+        further. This is, however, where it all began.
        </p>
        
        <center><h3>Centralised Machine Monitoring</h3></center>
diff --git a/www/probdomain.shtml b/www/probdomain.shtml
index 49667ad..cd274c1 100644
--- a/www/probdomain.shtml
+++ b/www/probdomain.shtml
@@ -34,9 +34,10 @@
        <center><h3>Original Problem</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
-        This is the original specification we were given when we took
-        on the project, and it seems an ideal basis for the problem
-        domain.
+        This is the original specification given to us when we
+        started the project. The i-scream central monitoring
+        system meets this specification, and aims to extend it
+        further. This is, however, where it all began.
        </p>
        
        <center><h3>Centralised Machine Monitoring</h3></center>