Some changes to layout, incorporated from a modified version by Paul ;-)

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        <center><h3>Original Problem</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
-        This is the original specification we were given when we took
-        on the project, and it seems an ideal basis for the problem
-        domain.
+        This is the original specification given to us when we
+        started the project. The i-scream central monitoring
+        system meets this specification, and aims to extend it
+        further. This is, however, where it all began.
        </p>
        
        <center><h3>Centralised Machine Monitoring</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
-        The Computer Science deparment has a number of different machines
+        The Computer Science department has a number of different machines
         running a variety of different operating systems. One of the tasks
         of the systems administrators is to make sure that the machines
         don't run out of resources. This involves watching processor loads,