Now do the whole CMS module.

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        <center><h3>Original Problem</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
        <center><h3>Original Problem</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">

-        This is the original specification we were given when we took
-        on the project, and it seems an ideal basis for the problem
-        domain.
+        This is the original specification given to us when we
+        started the project. The i-scream central monitoring
+        system meets this specification, and aims to extend it
+        further. This is, however, where it all began.

        </p>
        
        <center><h3>Centralised Machine Monitoring</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">
        </p>
        
        <center><h3>Centralised Machine Monitoring</h3></center>
 
        <p align="justify">

-        The Computer Science deparment has a number of different machines
+        The Computer Science department has a number of different machines

         running a variety of different operating systems. One of the tasks
         of the systems administrators is to make sure that the machines
         don't run out of resources. This involves watching processor loads,
         running a variety of different operating systems. One of the tasks
         of the systems administrators is to make sure that the machines
         don't run out of resources. This involves watching processor loads,